When i crossed the sandia (Dady Dado! The Sandia Mountains are in New Mexico...you're in Utah!) mountains by train i ve seen _____ beautiful landscape in my life :)

And when the train stopped i enjoy it to climbing the mountain and i walked like 10 KM or less it was a difficult road .
After a while i saw a small lake _________ i decided to sleep [here] ;) ..
But the beautiful view it was the sunset between the mountains :)
At night i decided to camping here after that i set up my tent it took it a lot of time because i camping alone :(
After i set up my tent i cut some wood to make fire to drink hot tea :)
After that some people [walk ]to me _____________ they want camping [here], i was happy to see them because i making friends on my trip :)
In the midnight after the wood fire was turned off by it self we enjoyed watching ___ beautiful sky and stars in the dark

Dady dado

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